RED LANTERNS #1
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Art and cover by ED BENES and ROB HUNTER
Size: 32 pages
Price: 2.99
Red Lanterns is a perfect illustration of what 12 year thinks of as edgy and adult, versus what an adult thinks. This book is really, really bad.
So many problems, where to begin? I think you should only offer constructive criticism, so here goes:
If the most interesting character in your story is someone’s cat, you should go back and develop your character better
A good first step would be to create characters that can actually form a complete sentence. Seriously, it really helps a story to have characters that can form sentences, or at a minimum entire words.
Vomiting Blood on your enemies is not as cool as you seem to think it is. Plues, it’s not very effective I would imagine.
Not every object or character needs to have blood dripping off it, or foaming blood from the mouth. It sort of loses it’s impact.
I sort of feel like the character maybe watched the Scotty Mcboogerballs episode of South Park, and just didn’t get the joke.
1 star out of 5
Art: 2 - Average
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