Tsifox

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June 7, 2010 1:43 pm

Anyone?? 

 

    Screams can be heard filling the air with terror. A young man panics and hides underneath his bed. The building across from him is engulfed in flames. As a Heroic Fire Fighter rushes back into the near collapsing burning building,a green light zips past him. He pays no attention. The peoples screams call out to him. Inside he manages to pull out a fairly obese women out from some burning support beams. He does his best and carries her through the smoldering ruble. As soon as she put to safety she calls out "Eli!! Oh Eli is still inside!! My precious cat Eli!!" With a sigh in his breath he rushes back in to find the feline.

       Across the street the zipping green light finds itself in the young mans room. The sound of whimpering can be heard. The now floating ball of green light lets loose a burst of light tossing the bed on it's side. A Yelp escapes from the young mans mouth. An echoing voice speaks from the ball of green light. "Twitchy Lastpickings you have been chosen to overcome great fear" The ball of green light moves toward the young Twitchy. The light hovers over his right hand then quickly wraps around his middle finger. The light dims to reveal a ring now on Twitchy's finger. Twitchy now stands and with a burst of green light, the young Twitchy now finds himself in a black and green uniform with white gloves. The voice speaks once more. "Welcome to the Green Lantern Corps"

     The screams from across the way have now been replaced with a rumbling from the building and then all of a sudden people cheering and applause. Twitchy approaches his window to see what the commotion is. He sees the Fire Fighter in the door way with a cat in one arm and a small girl in the next. The rumbling gets louder as the fire fighter puts them down. He is then quickly fallen under from a collapse above him. He has fallen on his stomach as more debris falls on him. A gasp from Twitchy leaves looking at himself wondering what he could do. He stares at the ring. A light flickers from it and all across him. He feels compelled perhaps by the light of the ring to make an exit through his window.

       He looks again at the Fire Fighter now trapped beneath the burning ruble. He stares at him and panics. He stares at him and wonders what to do. He stares and stares and stares. He stares too long. Another support beam gives way with much weight above it. And With not a moment left to spare the green light surrounds Twitchy causing him to float. Quickly he now moves to do what he must. The entire building now falling on it's own weight gives way and Crushes The Heroic Fire Fighter. Somehow still alive, the fire fighter feels all the pain coarse through what ever part of him that is still attached. He even feels every ounce of pain of whatever part of him is no longer attached. The Searing Pain from the Fire. The Pain of his Bones Smashed and the Ripping of his Flesh. The taste of his own blood choking him. These lasting moments are nothing more then seconds but to The Heroic Fire Fighter they have lasted ten thousand years. And then just then. Death. He is no longer with us. The crowd is in tears but the tears don't last for long. As beeping is heard from with in the collapsed building. BOOM!!!!! An explosion with a blast so enormous it engulfs the entire surrounding area and everyone in it. The other fire fighters. The police. The spectators. The rescued victims. Yes all of them. The Fat, the Cat and the Little Girl All Die. All Dead. Nothing but Death, Death, Death and also Death. 

       Through all this even the building across the street has been swept up in this chaos and sadness. The building even collapses on it's own as if it has nothing left to stand for. It's Lover across the street it never could be with but could only admire is gone. So the building just gave up and everyone in it died. Yup They all died too. Everyone except one. One smart young man who was overwhelmed but the sensation of what he Must do and what he he did was hide in his closet. He emerges with a green bubble surrounding himself. Who is he? He is one lucky young man. One man who was not capable of overcoming great fear.No. One man like any other. Like Anyone. A member of an elite group of Space Police. A member who was chosen by their policy. Anyone Can Be Chosen. He is Twitchy Lastpickings: The Green Lantern

February 26, 2010 2:42 pm

 I just read this as I am a bit behind in my books. I do enjoy David a whole lot in his X-factor run. I also enjoy the gay banter that happens in the books since Shatterstars return and follow up with Rictor. I just wonder if the gay topic that David brings up is there just for feedback purposes or awareness. I get how both Shatterstar and Longshot are more just Sexual as oppose to gay or straight. I would like to see this go somewhere and not just be a topic to poke at in the book. But that comment about Shatterstars old costume being gay compared to how he looks now, c'mon he is a bit more gay with his look now I think . I think that's an example of the gay line being over used just for the notice of it. 

     I would like to point out I do not like Shatterstars blades coming out of his arms. If it's there as an addition to his Katanas fine. But the use of the blades is just not as effective compared to the arc of motion you get from holding them in your hand and using your wrist. Another reason for Movie Deadpool for being stupid. 

    Another note was time frame and continuity. Continuity is always an issue for me and this book made a point of telling me exactly when it happens. Both Layla and Siryn are present informing me it's after the current x-factor story. Emma Frost is still in her Diamond form to prevent the Void sliver from spreading informing me it is before the current x-men books. That's always nice to have information like that. 

Anyways signing off

 Tsifox (Chee-Fox)